2010년 12월 13일 월요일

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20100399 Gillim Kim S16
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             I don’t agree cohabitation without marriage. These days, many people think, ‘we love each other very much, so what?’ Of course, people have the right of choice for their love, but I think you should to think your future before choice. Cohabitation’s influences harm more than your thinking. First, cohabitation means that you cannot protect by marriage-law. For example, cohabitation couple cannot claim alimony, separating property, the right of succession. Second, marriage traditionally is the four ceremonial occasions of coming of age, wedding, funeral, and ancestral rites. If cohabitation is acceptable, marriage’s holiness and responsibility disappear. So, marriage will be optional. Third, I think Korea’s society has negative view of the cohabitation. Especially, women incur blame for cohabitation without marriage because of emphasizing a chaste maiden. So, women who cohabited in former days wasn’t honorable to people. Marriage is a wise judgment for your happiness.

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             When I was eleven years old, I had a big incident at the home. My brother’s friend ran into home and cried out for help. Just, I and grandfather stayed in home. So, we wondered why he asked for help us. He told us that my younger brother hurt his face badly. When my younger brother came home, I almost fainted from shock because his face was a bloody pulp. I screamed and got out a room because I was terrible to see blood. He hurt his face because he fell down rock face. In former days, my grandfather said him not to go rock face. After all, he disobeyed my grandfather. My grandfather called 119 for ambulance without delay because my brother was bleeding profusely. That moment, a good neighbor took my brother to hospital. My brother was closed the wound in forehead and cheeks. We found enlightenment to listen to elder people.

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